That cringe is not canon even in fanfiction standards.
I may not be a ‘scientist,’ but I am a writer.
“Scientist”
Cringey fandom.
Check. ✅
The Big Bang Theory is someone’s collaborative fan fiction. Yikes!
Check. ✅
No wonder it’s wack and hard to read.
It makes me cringe to read it. Too much made up exposition. Makes no sense to me.
It’s like 11 year olds trying to emulate science fiction. Now, that’s just embarrassing. oof 😣
Move it to archiveofourown.org, until you guys can publish it as real writing in the science books.
Needs more character development and authenticity, like it was actually written by the main author.
Do not call it a “theory.” You guys are admitting its poorly written and hard to believe.
Use one writer. ☝️ 😎
That’s enough advice from me, the humble writer.
Polski
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