I think it was pretty good. Honestly from what I think of the Vanguard leaders, I feel Ikora and Zavala are a bit swapped but that might just be me. The guardians of the fireteam themselves seem... childish? I guess. That might be the point though. I've just been reading a lot of "mature" books recently, so I've gotten used to more adult characters. Character actions sometimes seem a little forced? Like the Titan I found believable, the warlock wasn't bad, but the Hunter (who seems to be the main character as of now) seemed kind of awkward in a way that wasn't part of his personality. That's really confusing to read, I know, but that's how I would describe it. Do you understand? Either way, I'm interested. And that's the main goal, isn't it?