Part two ( my original post got too long)
The fight starts off like a typical firefight. But after Dredgen starts to lose, he will flee. He gets on his sparrow and you must do a Star Wars style speeder chase. After catching up, you and Dredgen fall off a cliff when your sparrow overloads. Upon recovering, you try to reason with him one more time. Upon failing, you and Dredgen get in a western style shootout. After being wounded, you kill Dredgen, and your light draws out a bloody rose in the thorn. You return to the other hunters you came for and return to the tower. Unlike Kabr, the the city is relatively pleased to see the addition of new hunters. You want to recruit a warlock but as of the moment, the current warlocks are exiled or are not on good terms with the city. You want to gain the city's full trust before recruiting a not so friendly guardian. So you aim for guardians that saved the city. At the battle Twilight Gap, many guardians gave their lives to save the city and many were remembered in their own ways.
Your travel to the battle of the Twilight Gap. Of course the wall is under attack so you pitch in. The fight is a basic survive waves type but you can order guardians to maximize defense and minimize casualties. If you don't order troops correctly, the entire battle can be lost and must be restarted. Upon winning you convince many of them to join you. You also pitch in the idea to make a weapon that symbolizes team work and is made from fallen guardian's armor (sound familiar? Although you can never seem to get it :p).
You return to the tower with your new guardian army. This helps boost massive morale and the city is eager to take back their home. However, you must recruit the help of a guardian who understands the hive.
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How would more recent stuff impact history more than far ago. Should be the opposite
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Gonna edit that. I was thinking it over in my head too. Lol I did this half asleep at midnight
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Lol yeah. The Shin Malphur thing is a problem though. He killed Dredgen Yor and not the other way. You either mixed them up or thought that Shin Malphur was Jaren Wars , mentor of Shin and original owner of The Last Word. Shin Malphur is most likely still alive too so that would be more realistic
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Jaren ward yeah that one. Thanks a lot
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The story would still be incorrect seeing as both Jaren Ward and Dredgen Yor are dead. We're not 100% sure about Dredgen Yor being dead but if he wasn't there should at least be a storyline around it. The best player to ever enter the crucible who was claimed to be dead shouldn't just be out in the wild surrounded by 3 hunters. Shin Malphur would be better. If he is still alive he would be a scavenger living independetly so that would be pretty realistic having 3 hunters surround him in the wild
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Blargashlepaheee
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What ?
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Really good idea
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Is there anymore to this story line? A new forum would be a great idea that gets constantly updated, if you could send a link to the forum that would be great thanks... I fully support your idea
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Ok thanks, I'm doing this on my companion app so I don't know how that works
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If you # your name in it then I'll search with the # :)
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Great thanks. Now I haut need to copy all this and paste. :(
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It's only a suggestion, your stories are really good they can easily start trending
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Thanks. I made the post. Two of the # are #boogeyman333 and #fanmade
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Hope it trends friend :)
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If not I'll continue it here
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If you cold private message me a link that would be great
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Here ya go