[quote]Learn to actually write. I used to prefer script fashion as well, then I practiced an actual style which required a bit of tact. It's like choosing a shotgun over a sniper in an FPS. Sure, the shotgun is blunt and get's the job done, but the sniper is a weapon of art and patience, requiring practice for sweet, sweet headshots. Writing is an art, and you're coming at it like a shotgun and calling it "your style". [/quote] ^Wyoming