I know I am an asshole, but I think you need an asshole to tell you what you need to hear. I'll make it simple with a nice list so you can understand... 1. For the love of god, turn off the -blam!-ing fan/background noise. I can barely hear what you are saying. 2. Are you high/drunk? The first couple of minutes sounds like you are stoned out of your mind. Hell, you even state you forgot what you were talking about. 3. Stop complaining about lag, or that you are a -blam!-ing moron who forgot what setup you are running. "what? I don't have backstab? This is really distracting to my eyes". You're video is labeled "rules of pvp" and obviously you forgot the first rule - know what you are using. 4. Why the hell does it take 4:10 before you even start to talk about what the topic of the video is? By this point in the video, I had given up. You took over 4 minutes to tell the audience you have no clue what you are doing... In both playing the game, and you lack of editing skills. Woah, woah, woah, woah, woah, woah, woah, woah, woah, woah, woah,woah... He got me. And this guy is lagging... He is really lagging. Yeah, I know I am just sitting here with a shotgun.... WTF DOES THIS USESLESS CHATTER HAVE TO DO WITH THE POINT OF THE VIDEO? Again, are you -blam!-ing high? You want to make a better video? Get to the -blam!-ing point! No one is ever going to sit there and wait through your loud ass fan drowning out your stoned ass while you mumble about lag, what happened to some video file you lost, and literally telling the audience you forgot what you were doing. You have to be clear and precise in your presentation, or you will lose everyone's interest. Also, as of now, you just aren't cut out to try and make a live video documentary. You will have much more success if you voice over previously recorded footage. It's hard to break the ha but of raging on death, or bitching about some stupid shit as it happens in game, but nobody wants to hear it... Especially if you are too busy bitching for 4 -blam!-ING MINUTES before you finally start talking about the point of the video. I'm going to go out on a limb here and assume this is your first attempt. It is incredibly fun to do, but you need practice. The first thing you should practice is your ability to give a speech. Second, your ability to edit. You seem to at least make a nice design for the video title, but the whole intro to your vid is lackluster, and just thrown together. On your next vid, watch it objectively before you upload, and think to yourself, "is this worth watching?" "Am I inclinded to keep watching after 30 seconds?" That first 30 seconds will define your video to 95% of the audience as whether or not to continue watching. If your intro takes too long, it only shortens how much time you have to captivate your audience. Look at successful youtubers... What do they do the second their lame ass intro is done? Acknowledge the audience and thank them for watching. Don't take forever or, in your case, actually forget anyone is still there... Cause they already skipped to the next video.

Bumped!!! Thank you and good luck OP =}

First off, #Destiny. Second, I really think you should work on [b]properly[/b] capitalizing and punctuating your video titles and descriptions. Haven't watched a video of yours yet my brain is leading me to believe that you're a kid based off of your lack of basic grammar skills. Presentation is an important aspect to draw people in.

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