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The most important part of any character is understanding how this person views the world. Once you can understand how this person sees the world, it's easier to figure out how they would react to any given situation. For side characters and the like, you can honestly just stop here. If a character only exists for a single chapter, they don't need to be very deep, and having a base understanding of how they view the world is usually enough.   But of course, for main characters, you want to dive deeper, and the next step is to figure out *why* they think that way. What kind of past did they have to make them develop the mindset. Sometimes, it's a single inciting incident that warped the way they see the world--and if that's the case, it can also help to define how they viewed the world before the incident as well. In other cases, there was no single incident that made them the way they are, they just sort of grew up that way. Finally, once you have where the character is right now firmly established, think about where they're supposed to go. What is their arc? Is the mindset they have a good one, or a bad one, and likewise is the arc they're going to undergo a positive change, or a negative one? What kind of events can take them from where they are now to where they're supposed to go, and how does their internal logic shift to get them from point A to point B? Then, once you have all that, you get to add in the final core puzzle piece; other people! With very few exceptions, no character exists in a vacuum. They exist in a world full of other people, and those people affect the way they see the world, and themselves. Everyone operates under their own internal logic that makes sense to them, but the logic they operate by isn't necessarily going to mesh with the logic someone else operates by, and when these two opposing ideologies collide, it's going to create a change in both people. Example time! [spoiler]Step 1: Bop is a lazy, grumpy little kitty cat, who kinda hates being around people, but also can't turn his back on someone in need. He'll pull you out of a burning car crash, and then tell you to get lost. The world is kind of just a chore he has to clean up. Step 2: Everyone in Bop's life either betrayed him, was trying to use him, or got killed because of one of the other two. He's almost never had anything meaningful in life to live for, and the one time he did it got ripped away from him. Because of this he has a very jaded worldview. Still, he just has a naturally big heart, and no matter how much life beats him down, he just can't tell his dump empathy to shut the heck up. Step 3: Bop learns to accept people back into his life, and finds a new family over the course of his adventure. He's still a grumpy old man, but now he's a grumpy old man who cares for these dumb kids who roped him into all this nonsense. Step 4: Bop meets Emily & Aifos, and gets forced to go on this big globe-trotting journey with them. As the only actual adult in the group, he naturally becomes the dad of the group, and after taking care of these two numbskulls, he finds himself actually starting to like them. In the end, he winds up taking care of the orphaned [name redacted for spoilers], finally allowing himself to have a family again.[/spoiler] Now, it should go without saying, this is very simplified. Crafting characters is very nuanced, but this is a general guideline on how I do it. Sometimes Steps 1 and 2 are switched.
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  • Aifos with the writing genius as usual. Thanks for the help!

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  • Of course! Writing characters that align more easily with your mindset is easy, but the thing that can be real tricky is when you're writing characters who don't have a mind that aligns with your own. Because the thing is, even though their logic doesn't line up with yours, they [i]do[/i] still have an internal logic that they operate by that does make sense to them. One surprisingly useful tool in an author's toolbelt is the ability to understand the mindsets of people you disagree with. When someone says or believes something that's totally unthinkable to you, and being able to stop and go like "Okay, well, how do they think that leads to this conclusion?". This can actually be a real nasty exercise when you try to understand people who think particularly vile things, but is ultimately a good thing both in and outside of writing. One not-so-nasty example, though, came in Heart of the World, where one of the main characters was Emily. Emily is, well... She's an idiot. Straight up. Super dumb. It could've been easily to just smack a "Durrr, I don't know nothin'" label on Emily, and call it a day, but, even though the things Emily says might not be the deepest, she does have an internal logic that makes sense to her. Another example! [spoiler]There's a moment in The Heart of the World, where Bop sits out a big plot event, and then the heroes all do something incredible. When they get back and report to him, he says something along the lines of: "Wow, I didn't think you'd actually pull it off. Kinda wish I was there to see it." To which Emily responds: "That means you'll come to this [big plot thing], right?" And then Bop just kinda looks at her like "what the hell is this girl on about?". To Emily, this makes perfect sense. Bop missed one thing, and wishes he was there to see it, so of course he's going to want to be there for this completely unrelated thing. To Bop on the other hand, these two events are completely unrelated, so whether or not he was there for one should have no bearing on whether he wants to be there for the other.[/spoiler] Regardless of which mindset makes the most sense to you, the important thing is both of these characters had their own internal logic trains that made sense to them, and that makes them feel more real. People don't just do things without justification. If someone does something, they have a reason for it. Maybe they knew it was wrong, but they managed to convince themselves because it's for the greater good, or they did good last week so they earned it, or they just really, really want to do it, and convince themselves they can make up for it later. Or, perhaps someone does something that makes absolutely no sense out of context, but they just put two and two together in a way that no one else did. Or, maybe they tried, but they couldn't put two and two together if you lent them one and gave them the other. That doesn't really have anything to do with the subject at hand, but it was a hilarious joke I heard so I'm mindlessly regurgitating it.

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