I don't want to spoil my story, so I can't tell you why it's not possible for Koran-5 to be there, but maybe you could turn this...
[quote]We walked until we found a cave, he beckoned me inside. I saw other Guardians, other hunters, other followers of Shin, amongst them was an exo. He introduced himself, though he never said what his name was, none of them said a word, not a name, nothing just silence.[/quote]
Into this...
[quote] We walked until I could see the mouth of a cave, when we reached it he stepped inside, motioning me to follow.
The cave opened up to a large cavern where other Guardians already sat, apparently awaiting Shin's return.
He beckoned me to sit with a small group of hunters, I did so without complaining. Once I had, one of the other hunters sidled up beside me and introduced himself.
"Hey you doin' ok? Oh where are my manners, I'm (insert name here)," he said, extending his hand for me to shake...[/quote]
That's all I'll do, it's up to you if you want to keep it as is or add to it.
[spoiler]you miss spelled Mcreed.
And if you put it here you should put it on the other one before this one.[/spoiler]
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Done, edited the tags on lol of the other stories.
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Ok :)
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Did you see what name I inserted there?
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Oh, sorry it didn't tell me about this hold on.