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8/25/2018 11:08:01 PM
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With all due respect, how do you write parts so short? No way I could do that, so much to get through.
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Well I have an idea of what I want to accomplish when I start writing and I finish when I feel that I have completed that. If you don’t like them being short tell me and I will work to make them longer.
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No need to make them longer as long as you enjoy writing the part. I was just genuinely curious
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I would like some feedback from offtopics resident writer tho. What do you think so far?
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I’ll need to get back to you on that. I’ll let you know tonight
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Thank you!
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Nothing negative to say about the writing. It’s similar to mine which is the superior way to write in my opinion. Just keep doing what you’re doing and have fun. I’m not exactly the best person to ask for story perfecting as my story has confused the hell out of people and myself sometimes. I have a problem of adding way to much depth and possibilities and then confusing myself.
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“Superior” way. Bah!
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Bakada
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Grakata* Also Yes your version is much much easier to write lol. Longer versions are harder but produce much more detail. It all depends on what you prefer.
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I admit I leave out detail and wish I could use more but I honestly would need a laptop for that kind of writing
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Yep it is a -blam!-ing hellhole to type on a phone lol. But anyways your story’s brilliant in detail and plot. There are some minor things that irk me (but I mean all stories have mistakes amirite?) but for the most part it is pretty gorgeous.
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What are the things that “irk” you? I’d like to know
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I’ll pm them to you.
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Thank you very much! I took a lot of inspiration from your work.
