Very nicely done! The creature reminds me of a wendigo (or at least until Dawn’s version of it) and the seclusion of the story is very chilling. I don’t know if it’s just me reading fast or if it’s the story but I thought that the climax of it running toward him came a little fast. A little tip to bring suspense is To. Space. Words. Like. This. When you are getting to a defining feature in a story like: “I gasped in complete and utter shock as it lifted its head from feasting on my friend, and that’s when I saw It. Had. No. Face.” Anyhoo I really can’t wait to see more of this story! :)