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2/6/2015 7:58:26 AM
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I like. Although I would think the warlock to be somewhat of a intellectual, and the phrase "you little dicks" come off like either a 14 year old or a white trash tweaker in his 40's. Could not get that image out of my head.
Love the story in general. Would have liked to see more of the battle.
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Well, I don't know. Perhaps there is another word that would have the same vibe, but something about all Yor just seems like he has always wanted to say that, even when he doesn't. I could change it if you have a good alternate line. I was mostly going for the attitude.
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No suggestions?
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No. It's your work and it's good.
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Thanks, I was starting to think people didn't like it much. I almost revised it more, but then I read that lore-wise Yor's final battle was supposed to happen in an entirely different place, so meh.
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People only reply to negative posts. I say keep at it. I like be this stuff.
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Thanks :) I also have a Destiny 2 intro on here somewhere, you might like that too. If you can't find it with search I could probably find it if you like ;)
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Oh cool. I'll check that out. Thanks.
