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Edited by Exit: 1/27/2015 1:17:26 AM
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[i]*Continued from above.*[/i] Lock began his countermove… another short monologue to distract and give the others time to prepare. Sky reached into her jumpsuit and pulled out two capsules of Ether. With all of the guards focusing on Lock and his pretty words, she began to screw them both into the extra ports of the mask and suck at their supply generously. She could feel her life force flow through her veins once again… giving her strength. She moved to give Vahn a few of his own, but the Captain, blinded by rage or perhaps pride, refused. He continued to pace back and forth in anger, looking at everything and everywhere else but at Sky. He too was doing his own preparations. In his primitive mind, he’d carved out a path toward Dez, the guard who [b]”[Talk to much]”[/b]. He could already see the bodies of those he’d leave in his wake and could almost feel the man’s throat in his hands. [b]”She’s not as stupid as you make her out to be and that says nothing of your ‘promotion’."[/b] Lock continued. [b]"Men… or rather you boys have no power here. You should know that better than anyone. How long have you been stuck here at the ass end of the Reef?”[/b] Dez ground his teeth. He said nothing for a short while knowing full well what Lock meant. The Queen ruled a matriarchal society. Women held power while men were made to scramble around at their backs. He’d been trapped within these walls for longer than he could remember, a prisoner of the Reef in his own way… and this was his way out. [b]”I’ve been here too long Lock… A lot longer than you. You’re not the only one trying to escape.”[/b] He motioned at the guard behind Lock with a nod. [b]”Check him. Make sure he hasn't lifted anything 'pointy' off Izzy.”[/b] Lock didn’t bother to look the guard in the eyes as he made his way toward him. Instead he looked to Sky and she nodded slowly. This was it. [i]Continued in [url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/95312709]Chapter Six or The Chamber, Part 2[/url][/i]
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  • My friend you never disappoint. Another great chapter ps love the cliffhangers makes me want to read the next chapter even more ^_^

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  • Keep writing bro! You're doing a great job. But why the cliffhanger!!!!???

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  • You're cliffhanging is over! [url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/95312709]Enjoy[/url]!

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  • i know, its painful...but a good job at it - because now i keep checking back every few hours to see if its here lol

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  • And it's [url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/95312709]up[/url]. Enjoy! Sorry for the late release. The chapter is really two in one and it went through a number of revisions.

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  • It'll be up tomorrow sometime in the afternoon (pacific time). A little bit of a delay due to real life responsibilities and the fact that this next chapter was the toughest for me to put to "paper". I ended up rewriting it a few times. Hopefully you'll guys will enjoy it when it's out. Sorry for the wait. I'll let you know when I drop it.

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  • Awesome! Can't wait for the next part! Your fight scenes are really good, I can't wait to see how this one plays out XD As always, keep up the good work!

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  • [url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/95312709]Chapter Six[/url] is finally done haha. Try to enjoy it lol. it's a little bit of a winded read but it should be good. Lots of action.

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  • Awesome read bro I'm loving your story And don't worry, I like longer fan fictions XD

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  • ohh no you didnt...no you cant have done this to me....i cant believe it...how can you end it right there....this is painful....gaaahh now i have to wait lol....good thing you're well on your way to finishing the next chapter!!! lol Again, wonderful job - I was able to immediately jump right back into the next chapter, everything came back and the mood was set - although, i gotta say, im starting to get what i call christmas syndrom - Its where you're so excited and cant wait for the day to come (the end of the book) but also dread the end, because then there is no more story to read haha - keep it up!

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  • MOAR!!!! Including this in the lore thread later.

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  • Love it as always keep it up and let me know when the next chapters out bro I can't get enough lol

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  • [url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/95312709]Chapter Six[/url] is finally out. A little bit late but hopefully you'll still enjoy! Thanks for following Nova :]

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