Awesome job once again man. You capture emotion and tension very well. Can't wait until the next part! It's starting to sound like ricochet and the lot were part of a Spartan program XD As always, let me know when the next part drops XD I'm workin on something but it won't be nearly as polished an good as yours.
Until next time Mr. Ricochet
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And I'm sure yours'll be great man. No fanfic is better or worse than any other. I mean if I was that great they'd pay me ;-). Lemme know when yours drops!
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Haha, alright
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Haha that would be a funny twist. The Spartan program thing. Not quite, but not too far off at the same time.