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11/17/2014 2:26:35 AM
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This is pretty good if your under 18. Not up to par with other fanfics, though. I'm not saying its bad but it just seems like it was written by a kid based mostly off the immature behavior of the characters. If your young then keep it up, your writing will progress with practice. If your an older gentleman I'd suggest leaving the lore to the devs. Just my 2¢ anyway.
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Edited by Drokantoro: 11/17/2014 2:44:02 AMIt wasn't meant to be a serious one tough, and they are acting this way, because that mostly how me and my friends are while playing, we are 19 years old, but not really mature, and making it kind of fun at the beginning to caught attention then make it more sreious was kind of the idea, but thanks for your opinion.* *Got a grammatical error
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Yeah, your still young. It's not bad so don't take offence to what I'm saying. It's just immature compared to some of the other fanfics around. Then again that's kind of like comparing Space Balls to Star Wars. Both equally awesome in their own way.
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Well, thank you!, but I'm planning to write something serious, just need to make me hear in this forums by some way.
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Well keep it up, looks promising.
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If you are interested parts 2,3,4 are already done.
