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5/10/2014 4:23:51 PM
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[quote]The bodies of a dozen men towered over her, mangled and tortured into a single monstrosity. Arms and legs were twisted around each other, heads rammed between torsos, a dozen pairs of lifeless eyes staring at Malina. The creature growled quietly, a chorus of warped voices. A pair of eyeless sockets looked the fallen girl up and down as the arms of three men parted, their hands grasping and their long nails dirty and jagged.[/quote]
From my current fantasy novel.
I call it the Beast of Bodies.
English
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I feel I made it too small and too organized. In my mind it was less formed. More of a mountain of bodies that had the ability to move
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It's like a somehow more twisted vision of the human centipede. -blam!-ing love it!
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Edited by Tartan 118: 5/26/2014 6:29:54 PMOoh, now then. I imagined it more like a T-rex in terms of shape, although this longer profile is pretty cool too. Also I figured a human limb for each of its digits. But the three pairs of legs is a nice way of mutilating bipedal humans into something less human, and the legs as like reverse-facing horns is also really cool. I love the details. A head for a tail is so -blam!-ed up. :D Holy shit, the legs are like several arms twisted together. Also amazing. :D
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For a second I thought this was going to turn into erotica. Glad it didn't.
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That's later in the series.
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I'll call it Bob. Not as threateniñg.
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Ñot quite. I think an early name for it was also the Wrath of Humanity. Woh for short, or called Woe by its enemies. Then I realised that was a sweet name and idea but didn't fit into the story in any way.
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[quote]Ñ[/quote]I have no idea how or why my tab decided to do that! I have never used that in my life. Can I call him Robert formally?
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Edited by Tartan 118: 5/11/2014 3:18:59 PMI'm sure one of the men was called Robert. Or maybe more than one, so majority rules. In canon, I know one of the men, at least. Spoilers.
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OMG SHOOT IT IN THE HEAD! WHERE"S THE -blam!-ING HEAD!?!
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Lellity. :D My idea for the look follows: [spoiler]I suddenly pictured its chest as two men's torsos with a face where the sternum would be. Limbs are easy: the men's limbs hold joints together, head acting as the ball to any sockets, and limbs on the final body acting as digits. Maybe a man's arm for the eyebrow of each eyeless socket.[/spoiler] You can thank 300's 'tree of men' for the idea.
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SMI... DRAW THIS RIGHT NAO!!!!
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I plan to when I get off work. Like the design. It appeals to my interests and I've been rearranging it's body in my head as I've been completing tasks today
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I am very much looking forward to this. :D
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Awesome.
