Not too good. It sounds like you're acting. You need to believe you are that person. Think like a crazy person would. Try changing your voice too. No offense but your default voice isn't too threatening.
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Gotcha! Had a better idea in mind for a new one. I tried to pull off this one with something from Marlon Brando in Apocalypse Now and Vaas from Far Cry 3 combination.