Your commentary is easy to understand, but it comes across as impersonal, like an anchor giving the evening news or a professor giving a lecture. Thankfully, you don't mumble or speak in a monotone, but the voice sometimes seems a little artificial. Videos that don't have super awesome production quality benefit from some personality, like what you had in the Heavy Rain and Battlefield references. Other than that, I just have some nitpicks. I would work on the editing a little: your Indigo Prophecy and Heavy Rain pics at the beginning aren't the same size, and the font for your score breakdown at the end seems a little childish. If you want to show your face to viewers, try to find a better setting. At least close your closet doors and get your bed and military gear(?) out of the frame. Good review overall. Being understandable and having organized commentary already puts you above a lot of people trying to do the same thing.