Yeah I noticed my hiccups with the speaking. I really do need to watch my wording, and practice the reading part before I print it. I am just trying to figure that part out, its kinda hard to be informative while trying to have a "conversation" with a camera. For the things that I barely mentioned, I wanted it that way because those things have already been said. So I just wanted to get right into the bells and whistles of what the game does right and wrong. For instance, we already know the story, the characters, and how beautiful the place is. I just wanted to touch on them slightly, and get right into the other stuff. Oh yeah, I wanted to make it a bit more entertaining this time. So I had that idea with Mr. Popo and the "special" pop up. Hopefully I succeed?