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originally posted in:Art and Stuff
Edited by Cal Carlson:
7/22/2013 4:48:20 AM
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Very cool! I love the face and overall positioning. That being said It may just be an illusion from the armor but the proportions of her right shoulder seem a bit off. I think either moving the scarf to the other side or moving the shoulder pad would balance her shoulder area a lot more. Really great work so far I look forward to seeing more of it.
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THanks for your input cal, i deff agree about moving the scarf to the other side, hopefully i'll have it finished soon!
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Edited by Halcylon: 7/22/2013 10:17:30 PMMan this is great. I think I see what Cal is saying and the right shoulder/arm is a bit off scale. It a super great exploration so far. She feels a bit stiff, but that could be because of that right arm. Edit: Also I think the breast - [i]giggity [/i]- plate is a bit large, no? Keep it up!
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Edited by MarshMellonie: 7/22/2013 10:31:38 PMTHANKS! and yes I agree the breast plate is to large, im editing that haha! I wanted it to seem like armor over cloth over flesh....but maybe there's a bit too much flesh hmm? haha edit: to -> *too
