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originally posted in:Art and Stuff
6/27/2013 10:28:11 PM
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Dude nice work
The way you make the vex. Sound is good even though we know nothing about them
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Thanks! I tried to make them seem very real to the reader, as if they're like a robotic, emotional time bombs going off. I thought that making their hearing/sight as sensitive as it is in the writing, that would assist in their realism. Thanks you so much for reading!! Any additional feedback, comments, or thoughts on what could happen next?
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Well the way you ended the story (which was epic) he more them likely has gone through a portal through time making him end up somewhere on still making sense could be hard So why not start with another member of the fire team (seeming they where separated) also it might be worth nothing but I read somewhere the vex where able to steal souls. Kinda of like the in unknown enemy that has yet to be ancouned
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Great thought! I hadn't thought about that! [quote]also it might be worth nothing but I read somewhere the vex where able to steal souls. Kinda of like the in unknown enemy that has yet to be announced[/quote] Could you reword this though?
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There is another main enemy who is know for stealing souls (as said lol) bungie hasn't announced them yet I read somewhere vex might have the same abilities but using their eyes to rip your soul right from your exo shell :3
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If that's so, I'll just make him a human or some other race.
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Have you ever played mass effect?
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Na, why?
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And sorry I'm using my phone and it's screen is cracked
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Edited by RANMAN10: 6/28/2013 2:24:57 AMIt's cool. Will you vote? It's okay, be honest :D
