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originally posted in: I wrote a horror story. Criticism?
6/13/2013 4:11:16 PM
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I'd like to give you advice but I'm something of a writer myself and very pessimistic when critical. Like I do with my own writings, I will probably end up only looking at the negative. Without giving details, a pretty good read.
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  • I totally understand what you mean. When I first read through it, I thought it was shitty. But then I was like, there's no way the next guy could write this. So I decided to share it to see what people would think.

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  • People tell me I'm a great writer but whenever I write something I just think "shit" and delete it.

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  • Same here. If you ever want someone to be the judge of that, message me your story. I'd be glad to read it and give you constructive criticism dude. :D

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  • I'll keep that in mind when I replace my shitty laptop and get down to some writing. Cheers, man :)

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