Yeah sorry, but you insert way too many texts in-between hers. I would've tried something like this:
Hiya
6:00pm
-Hey
6:15pm
Saw you at the sidewinder, they made it a little worse for the next group though, we pretty much went upside down.
6:17pm
-Oh did you see [redacted] throw up on me?
6:18pm
Wait what? You were able to get cleaned up properly right? (Wait a few hours for a response by this point, then text with something off-topic, you don't want to text bombard]
6:18pm
[Redacted]
6:20pm
[Redacted]
6:24pm
-Oh it was like the last ride and i had a blast till... He threw up on me.
6:25pm
I could see how that could mess up the rest of the day, at least you got everything out of the way before it happened.
6:26pm
-[Redacted, you just weren't paying attention here]
6:27pm
I was on it the first time with you i think, but next time just ask me to sit besides you. I'd be glad to shield you next time. (After this point say your good-byes and don't spam)
6:28pm
That's how i would do it anyways.
English
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I ran it threw my head a few times and I would have just done something like this. Hiya -Hey How did it go at [Amusement park] -It was a blast until [redacted] threw up on me. When did that happen? -It was the last ride, it was a blast until then. Well at least it was the last ride, would have been worse if it were at the start. Anyway, see you monday! -See you. Something to that effect would have been way cleaner.
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It still shows her having a sort of detachment to you as a friend, you would expect if there was a mutual liking in the friendship currently, she would be more actively replying to you with questions of her own. If she continues replying without adding onto what you've said and without asking a question herself, i would look into just staying friends, and maybe not even friends at that point since it doesn't seem like it's going anywhere.
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Yeah, I stopped trying to be "with" her a long time ago. But she seemed friendly enough the day before this when we were in class, she was asking to look through my sketchbooks and we were actually having a conversation. Who knows really, and I'm not going to pin it on her being upset about the being vomited on because it didn't seem to bother her anymore. *Shrugs*