I don't mean this in an asshole way but you need to change your voice lol Your delivery of how you say things is to robotic for attempting to do a laid back fun style review. You made some good points and had decent content detail which is the important part though so all and all a decent review. I just think you may want to consider picking what direction you want to go. More serious or over the top fun type review. Best of luck in the future.
Maybe try reviewing some old content (that you don't even have to upload if you don't want) to really find what direction you want to take. Also keep in mind you I am aware you did not ask for my 2 cents so I understand if you tell me to go fuck a duck lol
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Im curious, how did I sound robotic?
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Voice fluctuation or lack there of. At times when you were explaining things about the game and times when you were excited about something sounded the same and had very little change of tone or volume. I think it was a solid review and really only had issue with the delivery. that's just me though. I didn't have the sense of the game coming out in your review and more of this is my opinion on the game. I know, I know that's the point of a review but I wanna be sucked (haha) into the review and really believe what is being said.