your stand-up is much better but it's still kinda meh.
you should work on your voice imo; the monotone doesn't lend very well to the humour.
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-noted thanks cultmeister i will definitely work on that need to be more comfortable in front of the camera. i appreciate your suggestion!
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-noted thanks cultmeister i will definitely work on that need to be more comfortable in front of the camera. i appreciate your suggestion!