Very good, as per usual! I have to say I disagree what Blueberry said about Winter’s room lacking character. We didn’t learn too much about her, yes, but it was the room of someone who left this place behind, which I think says something on its own. I liked it—though, I think it might’ve been better to put it last rather than first. You would’ve gotten all these descriptions on how the rest of them lived & decorated their rooms, then this bleak empty space of someone who left. It’d be a neat, melalcholy contrast to the rest of it. I do agree that the sudden help of Gorlok seemed out of place, though. The moment at which it was placed was fine, but there wasn’t any indication he knew anyone was there, and the fight didn’t seem particularly noisy, at least, not in my head. I also already read that you rushed it, so no need to repeat yourself there. :p Also, this is, like, Witch Queen Nil, right? If so, I really [i]should[/i] do something with Selicy, because the two of them having a conversation seems like it’d be fun!