"Hello," Nil waves awkwardly, "I understand you're upset, but I'm not who-"
"I know who you are. The one who slumbered deep below while that thing-" Melinoe points to her sword, "- wore your face and caused all kinds of misery."
Meeting the gaze of the sword, Nil draws her own, "You serve it then?"
"Nah, just using it," Melinoe takes a step to the right and Nil matches her, assuming a defensive stance.
"See it [b][i]hates[/b][/i] you, but not as much as it hates me." Melinoe continues as the women circle each other, "It doesn't want me to kill you, which tells me I'm on the right track to killing it."
"Please, we share an enemy," Nil lowers her sword, "I don't want to fight you."
"Well that's a shame, hopefully your daughters don't go down so eas-"
A flurry of snow rises in her wake as Nil lunges, becoming a blur of strikes and slashes and rising snow. Melinoe backsteps, dodging and deflecting with her bracers. Then she grabs the blade and kicks Nil in the gut, sending her stumbling into the snow.
"You rely too heavily upon your unnatural strength and agility," Melinoe snaps the sword over her knee and tosses the pieces aside, "But you lack any training or skill to back it up."
Nil hisses and extends her hands, but nothing happens. The red eye of Melinoe's sword glows as it glares at her.
"Falling back on your magic?" Her lip curls in disgust as she picks Nil up by the throat, "How did one as weak as you command such power in the past?"
Before she was laid to rest it had been centuries since Nil had felt pain, but Melinoe reminded her. Every blow felt like a pelted rock, her skin bruised, her bones broke, and her vampiric healing could not mitigate the damage. Nil tried to fight back, but she was too slow, too weak, too thirsty...
[i]...Blood...[/i] Nil feels it within Melinoe's palms as she clutches her, and Nil clutches back before sinking her fangs into Melinoe's neck.
"Go ahead, drink up," Melinoe let's go as Nil feeds, but she finds no sustenance. Falling to her knees, Nil coughs up a thick black ichor that mingles in the snow with her own red blood.
"Sorry, [i]darling[/i]," the bite wounds on her neck already healing, Melinoe extends a hand and her sword flies to it, "in the end, Death always wins."
Before Melinoe can deliver the killing blow, Gorlok leaps onto her back and stabs her. She stumbles, then grabs and tosses him aside as Nil uses the distraction to retreat a few meters away. Melinoe begins to give chase, then pauses as something beeps behind her. She reaches back, but cannot remove the small metallic device he had stuck to her armor.
Shoulders slumped, Melinoe turns to Gorlok and sighs, then she is engulfed in bright light. A small crater replaces the ground where Melinoe once stood and a crack of thunder echoes off the mountains. Gorlok stands, yellow eyes narrowed, and the other two emerge from the mansion behind him.
The girl raises an eyebrow, "Who's this then?" While the knight falls to a knee and bows, "My Queen! We serve, as ever your most loyal servants!"
"Please don't..." Nil responds, barely a whisper on the wind.
The knight looks up, "My Queen?" Then rises to his feet as Gorlok approaches, slowly.
"It is you in there, yes?" He asks, still braced for combat.
"Yes," Nil takes a step closer to the cliffs edge and summons her sword, which appears in her hand as if it were never broken.
At the sight of the sword Gorloks posture shifts and his eyes soften, "We mean you no harm, my lady. Threats gather around us and an army marches from the west, lead by a member of the Draug."
Memories from Blaze's blood flash before her eyes of fur clad warriors and witches.
"A war is coming and we need you."
"I-" More memories, this time her own, of undead legions marching through snow, enemies impaled upon pillars of ice, piles of burning bodies, sickened villagers weeping tears of blood. A chorus of moans and screams drown Gorlok out, and a voice whispers in her ear
[i]Monster[/i]
"I can't, not again. Never again." Nil takes another step back, a bloody tear running down her cheek, then she falls.
Gorlok lunges forward as a thousand white bats fly off towards the city, into the rising sun. The girl walks up and pats him on the back, "So what now bossman?"
English
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[i][b]I’m going to need two bolters for this heresy.[/b][/i] [spoiler]Sorry, all out of salt.[/spoiler]
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[i]Ar'el til na'lin, Ina'bis[/i]
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I’m too lazy to translate...is that legit Tolkien elvish? [spoiler]Sorry, all out of salt.[/spoiler]
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Nah, slightly modified Dalish from Dragon Age. I wanted a more obscure version of Elvish most wouldn't recognize for my Elves here.
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Ah. That’s definitely out of my nerdrealm, so I’d say it worked! [spoiler]Sorry, all out of salt.[/spoiler]
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Translates to "I will taste your blood, Eyeblight!" Btw ;)
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Eyeblight is a most excellent insult! Unfortunately, this is all still [i][b]purgeable heresy[/b][/i]. [spoiler]Sorry, all out of salt.[/spoiler]
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Bamp! Finally I get to find out who Melinoe is.
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I had another story awhile where she basically exposition dumps who she is and where she came from, but I can't find it in my tag. I spat it out in one sitting so it was terrible, but still, lore stuffs
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The kind that were made in one sitting but still work fine have a chance to be the best.
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[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forums/Post/256005137?sort=0&page=0]I guess it wasn't one sitting, but it definitely is not the best![/url]
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Huh....you’re right, I take back my quick praise, it’s not the best...
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You know, it's also possible I just don't like writing Melinoe. She's the product of a time when God Modding was rampant and I wanted a "-blam!- you button" for that. Meh, I've got some time between other things to flesh her out better.
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Well, I’m sorry for that you needed that in the first place. But she could prove interesting, especially with other people’s characters, (ie:Keria as she’s a power fantasy anyway, and I’m assuming Melinoe was one of your own).
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More of an Anti-Power fantasy, really.
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What logic did you use? The only thing that can beat power is more power? Something along those lines?
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I made her to be the immovable object against unstoppable forces. She's kinda just scp-682 with an anti magic sword.
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Is the anti-magical effect magical? What happens if a beholder uses its anti-magic gaze on it? Would it then cease to be anti-magical or would it’s own anti-magic cancel out the beholders anti-magic. Now I want a pet beholder for experiments. I will have to find a way to convince Watson to get one.
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Probably something explodes like when you place a bag of holding into another bag of holding
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Edited by Warlock Holmes: 2/12/2021 4:38:04 AMAlways a good response when someone does something like that and you don’t know what would happen. Roll a random handful of dice, pretend to study them, and declare there is a explosion. Now do you happen to have any holy relics or some tasty gold lying about in that castle of yours? I need a way to bribe Watson to get a pet beholder.
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Sherlock, this may be hard to understand as a mad wizard that is used to just summoning what he wants, but owning a pet is a huge responsibility. If you want a beholder you have to prove to me that you will feed it, water it, and take care of it even if it does occasionally shoot it’s disintegration ray at you. Beholders also require a lot of space to themselves and a lot of time to play around with all your fancy wizard stuff.and experiment on all of your toys. Plus they are really hard to find and don’t come with a warranty that they won’t invade my keep, so you’ll need to pay me quite a bit. I may not hunger for gold quite like other adventures but it is useful.
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Please please please. I promise I will take care of it. I will feed it and water it and take it for walks. Please Watson please. All my friends have one. Halastar has a death tyrant and I am sure Zagyg did to. Both have much cooler ruins of chaos twisting and turning into the corridors of a mere endless dungeon than and ans it must be because of the beholders. But I promise It will be good. Please please please! Also I know you don’t hunger gold like other adventures. Your way of hungering gold is completely different than theirs!
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Edited by Unseelie Nil: 2/12/2021 4:47:19 AMNo castle, just a mansion. I also kept all my trinkets in the catacombs, which were within the mountain that fell into itself So I'm broke
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Fair point. I will have to get my gold from somewhere else. Or perhaps try using spells to break into the old catacombs and steal some but that would be mean. Maybe I steal Watsons gold and give it back to him pretending it is different gold. If he didn’t eat through our funding already. [spoiler]Also, I haven’t said this already, so very good job with the story. I liked it a lot. Usstan think thee story doth be sehr gut. [/spoiler]
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Edited by ImaDrizzit: 2/12/2021 2:08:12 AMAn anti magic sword? I’d love to get myself one of those, it would make a fine addition to my collection of swords used to fight various levels of powered people. Really cool story by the way, I wish I was good enough at describing more things then just combat to write like that.