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Edited by Knowingleveldoccod:
9/28/2020 4:31:01 PM
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The door opens and a man walks through, hes wearing silver armor with golden rims and parts of the armor glow a faint orange, he takes his helmet off and sits down at the bar, his helmet seems to disappear from thin air
"Hey barkeep ill take a beer!"
He glances to his right to see 2 strangers talking to eachother quietly and doesnt think much of it
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[i]I walk over, looking curiously at the newcomer.[/i] "Who might you be?" [spoiler]Some appearance stuff: Gender: Female Height: Around 6 feet, slightly taller. Facial Structure: My character's face looks like Rihanna, but that's about the only similarity between them. Clothing: A lace-like grey robe, drifting in the wind and being manipulated by unknown forces. Miscellaneous Information: Long black hair, Emerald green eyes, with flecks of gold and lapis, One glowing silver ring along with another blue metal ring. [/spoiler]
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"Im new here"
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"Well that's vague and unconvincing. Buy you a drink?" [i]I sit next to you at the bar.[/i]
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"Ive already got a drink thanks"
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"Fun fun. So what's your story?" [i]I chuckle and start fiddling with my ring.[/i]
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Edited by Knowingleveldoccod: 9/28/2020 6:20:35 PM"Just someone trying to help where i can" He gets a weird feeling about this [spoiler]I Should Probably Start saying i Shouldnt i?[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Yeah. Third person is for a character that isn't you. Such as my main account, (yes I have alts),AlexanderCrowley, I referred to myself in first person when using the character Crowley. Other then that, third person works. And as a suggestion, you're grammar punctuation and spelling could use work. But besides that you're doing good![/spoiler] "Really? Interesting." [i]I chuckle.[/i]
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Blaze rolls up the blueprints, and sets a beer near you. He does seem to be keeping his distance from you, watching you with his glowing red eyes. “Hello sir.”
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"Hi, how are you?"
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“Good.”
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"Sorry if i seem a bit weird" He glances at his armor "Im new here"
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Blaze nods. “That’s fine.” Fox clears her throat. “Hey, are you some sort of paladin or something?”
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"I guess you could say that... either way im here to take a break and relax" He takes a sip of beer "Thanks for the beer by the way"
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Blaze nods, but takes a step back. “...do you do any magic?”
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"Yes, why?"
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Blaze takes multiple steps back now. “....no reason.”
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Edited by Knowingleveldoccod: 9/28/2020 5:58:45 PMNotices blaze is keeping his distance "Is something wrong?"
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“Oh! Um uh...oh it’s just uh...it’s nothing!”
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He looks at the glows in his armor "Do i scare you? Cause if so i dont mean to." His armor glows darken to the point where they are barely visible
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“It’s not the uh...Y’know, lets just not talk about it.”
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"Thats fine" Looks to his left to see keira and answers her question "Im new here"
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[spoiler]Oh, you want to respond to that person if you start to talk to them![/spoiler] “Sorry I’m just....not the best around the holy types.” Blaze mutters. Fox slaps the back of his head. “Shut up!”
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"Thats understandable" He takes another sip of beer
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Blaze nods and steps back forward.
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I notice the blue paper "Hey if you dont mind me asking whats the blue paper for?"
