[quote]He had lifted his head and was looking both ways, “Where’s Irene?!”[/quote] [quote]“Whatcha gonna do?!” Irene hollered back, “Get yourself killed, too?! If you follow ‘im you’re both dead! You hear me?!”[/quote] [quote]Irene had a hole right over her eye, gruesome and gory, and blood covered her cheek and forehead. Small chunks of stained snow were matted to her face, which was set in a startled expression.[/quote] How did Irene force him down if she's dead in the trench? It's no biggie I know editing is hard.