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originally posted in: The lost exo#2 (fanfic)
Edited by Petra Fisher: 1/5/2020 4:43:09 PM
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Damn, how late am I? Ain’t really been active recently. Welp, time to get to reading. _______________________________________________ [quote]The exo placed his hand on the doors and they suddenly slid open.[/quote] You’re lucky you opened that door before your Ghost, she probably would have [i]accidentally[/i] set off every alarm on the facility and summoned five progressively more difficult waves of Hive from god knows where. [quote] “Of course lieutenant I [i]am[/i] your ship," the A.I. said with a cheerful tone "Here I have prepared the cabin for your arrival."[/quote] You got a free ship during your rez? Man you’re lucky, all I got was a bunch of angry Eliksni scavengers and a bad headache.... [quote] "Lieutenant?" Said the cheerful voice of the ships A.I. "There's some type of small drone following you into the ship. Should I terminate it?"[/quote] Nice [i]and[/i] straight to the point, I like her. [quote]"Oh then my name is Kate! You named me after your daughter."[/quote] Hmm....I’m gonna say you’re welcome, and you tell me if I’m wrong. [quote]"Of course lieutenant your name is Koran-5, the first exo to join this project."[/quote] So, he has a name, means I have more opportunities for.....*ahem* you know what. [quote]Sah voz,[/quote] Eh, close enough. _______________________________________________ Definitely improving from before with separated parts, can’t really give better feedback than KSeth, so all I can really tell ya is that you’re getting better, bud.
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