[quote]"I feel like I've killed enough to win a war"[/quote] Ok, Saint-14 [spoiler]in all seriousness, the whole thing was a great experince for you, and I can tell simply through the vast inprovements in writing. After you've written some other stuff, i'd recommend coming back and rewriting the whole thing under one tag, just to make it a little more coherent.[/spoiler]