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6/26/2019 10:25:07 PM
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This is pretty good. It's a nice ending to your story while maybe setting up another one. You've really improved from you last story.
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I never said it was the end of the story. Only the end of chapter one.
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Nice, I look forward to reading chapter two and see what you have next in store.
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It’ll only get crazier next chapter.
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If you need any tips on crazy ideas you can pm me and pick my brain for your next chapter.
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Next chapter should be longer. This one was just introducing you to the Phantoms. If everybody agreed to it, I would do something kinda like Cmirg’s risen event lol
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Nice. I'm excited to see you explore the idea of the Phantom race in your next chapter.
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Also, I’m probably going to put out a teaser for chapter two either tomorrow or this weekend.
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Nice, I'll be expecting it then. I'll probably pull up a teaser of my story some time, just when I have the time since tomorrow is my last busy day..
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Yeah, the teaser will definitely be tomorrow morning
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Oh that's great, I can't wait to read it for the first time.
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So, I might [i]not[/i] do a chapter two to this. I don’t know yet.
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No worries, take your time to decide what you want to do. Remember that this is your decision, not ours.
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I know. But I want to give people something to read, and if nobody reads them, there’s no point in writing them.
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That's true. Well, just know that I'll try my best and follow the story as closely as possible.
