[quote]“Wow. Do they really think they can make a difference in this hellhole” Toaster says coldly.[/quote]
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[quote]“Everyone, begin using your thrusters for evasive maneuvers!” Hourglass frantically says.[/quote]
“Everyone, begin using your guns for shooting!”
[quote]Whilst the gunners are firing away at the Titans, Saitonia walks onto the Anti-Aircraft gun deck and walks over to one.
“Give me that” Saitonia says, haphazardly shoving an IMC gunner off the turret.
Saitonia uses the turrets targeting systems, tracking a falling Titan.
“Gotcha” Saitonia whispers, as a heavy duty round hits a Titan.[/quote]
there’s just too much
[quote]As a Tone explodes, the color drains from Hourglasses face. “Not again, not like Dementer. Please” Hourglass gulps.[/quote]
... you mean Demeter?
[quote]Frost maneuvers her way over with her Ion, over near Books, and reaches her hand out. “Come on!” She screams, adamant on saving Books. [/quote]
I see you’ve invested in a dictionary.
[quote]Books inch’s his way over, and Frost grasps Books, pulling him behind her and putting him on her back.[/quote]
I’m glad Books was able to inch is his way over. I’m also really impressed by all the pronouns you were able to fit in there.
[quote]“Landing in T-Minus 20 seconds” Hourglasses Scorch calls out.[/quote]
Okay. You must be taking the piss. “Inch’s” and then “Hourglasses”? Christ Almighty.
[quote]Doc enters into the comms. “Hourglass, I’m going to diverge course with Vex, Sprang, and Dagger[/quote]
Maybe spend a little more quality time with that dictionary.
[quote]“Will do, Captain.” Doc Says, as him, Vex, Sprang, and Dagger thruster closer to the base.[/quote]
“...as him thruster closer to the base”
[quote]“Landing imminent” Hourglasses Scorch reminds the team.[/quote]
Aneurysm imminent.
[quote]“I only got impaled by a steel rod, that’s all” Books replies sarcastically.
“Oh shit, does anyone have first aid?” Hourglass asks[/quote]
no
nooooooooooo
[quote]an Ronin[/quote]
please
[quote]with Dagger already missing his weapon, with a large, gaping stab wound in his chassis and a melted off arm, getting backed into a corner.[/quote]
I had a hamburger with lettuce, with meat, with tomato, with bread, with a soda with a cup, with a straw, with ice.
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I really do enjoy the criticism. It helps me improve. But if you’re going to be sarcastic little shit about it, then please leave.