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2/28/2019 1:35:06 PM
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Great story line, so far. I hope you keep writing these, I would totally play this dlc! Just one thing:
The Replication Chamber is underground, satellite photos wouldn’t see it. Maybe cameras and/or Rasputin’s readings detected this Captain?
This is obviously constructive criticism, so I hope it helps you with clearing up the story a bit! But really though, bump!
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Thank you! What I meant to say was that satellite photos found a Captain heading towards the Perfection Complex, the same place we slew Aksis. I'm always appreciative towards criticism and/or feedback for suggestions, it's how I learn to become a better writer, so once again, thanks! [i]-The One and Many[/i]
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Ah I see. That clarifies it up a bit lol. But keep going! I just want to let you know you got a following here, and that we who enjoy stories and storylines would love to see more like this!
