[quote]This sounds a lot like my writing. And I don't mean plot or story wise, that is very original, but more the placement of commas, and your tendency to use only two words to describe something, one right after another, placing weight on the second one as more accurate and precise. Obviously there are some differences, such as you commonly clearly depicting which dialogue belongs to which character, and I'd argue that makes it easier to read than my own stories a lot of the time, so perhaps I'll be adopting a part of your style in the future. Just something I noticed, and obviously not something I'm complaining about, haha! Very good so far, this seems to be a very promising premise indeed.[/quote] ^Wyoming