5/10.
Your rant wasn’t long enough. You need a text wall of what should be 7-8 paragraphs strung together with no breaks, several misspellings, and general bad grammar. Throw a few incorrect uses of your and you’re as well.
You need to make it sound like you are truly triggered and on the verge of throwing your controller through you’re TV screen if you get one-shotted by that no skilled blast through the wall from across the map piece of shit. You know - make it sound worse than a shotgun.
Another obvious mistake was picking Jotunn. The problem there is that it doesn’t require PvP to obtain, and is generally easy for anyone to get.
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What about now
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Well done!!!
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He also didn’t repeat himself enough times and he didn’t have enough grammatical errors.