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1/28/2019 6:00:51 PM
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I was about to read this, but I don’t get how you can stand having people’s usernames as character names. As a reader, it’s really annoying, as a writer, I wouldn’t be able to type more than a sentence. >.<
Regardless, I hope your writing goes well! I wish I could offer some better criticisms than that, but.. Y’know.
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What’s wrong with my name?
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Nothing, as a username. But as an actual character name it’s very immersion breaking, because it doesn’t sound like a name, or a title. I wouldn’t want someone to name a character “The First Aifos” either.
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Edited by HollowedWayfarer: 1/28/2019 7:51:06 PMCodename
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If it’s a code name, then the story should have that established first before calling him that.
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I told Dragon to just go with Lee for the rest of the story. I’m sure they can work it in somehow.
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I saw. I dunno, maybe I’ll try to read it again if I get time.
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Edited by The Dragon: 1/28/2019 6:43:21 PM[quote]I was about to read this, but I don’t get how you can stand having people’s usernames as character names. As a reader, it’s really annoying, as a writer, I wouldn’t be able to type more than a sentence. >.< Regardless, I hope your writing goes well! I wish I could offer some better criticisms than that, but.. Y’know.[/quote] Thank you. Indeed it is very much out of place and breaks the 4th wall, but I wanted to give credit where credit was due within the canon of the story.
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I would just ask those involved to make a name for the story, or just put a little credits list at the end.
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[quote]I would just ask those involved to make a name for the story, or just put a little credits list at the end.[/quote] Great idea! I shall do so now.
