Not the ending I was expecting, wasn't bad though [spoiler]constructive criticism/feedback So we're at the end of another season, this end felt more like a set-up for another season. Don't know if you've got anything planned. Compared to the original asterisk your writing has improved, while still maintaining its bloody, punchy, and over the top style. Think this season holds the record for longest without a death, which was good for some character development. My only major criticism was snowy's death didn't have enough of an emotional impact on disciples character primarily, considering the events that led up to this point, he yelled no, said it should have been me, and that's about it. Anyway, keep it up, overall good work this season[/spoiler] Ok, double checked part 16, adjusted feedback accordingly