originally posted in:Fan Fiction Unite
Wow. Just... [b]wow![/b]
That was [i]fantastic![/i]
I have literally no nitpicks or criticism, and this was easily your best part yet in my opinion.
Every sentence and every word flowed seamlessly, to the extent that I was surprised that it was over already, oblivious to the actual length of the post.
[i]You have talent my friend, real, honest and crucial talent.[/i]
You will always have my time.
English
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Thank you, my friend. You know you have mine. I'm glad you the pace was smooth; I admittedly was a little worried about the pace with the multiple changes of perspective. Thanks for the feedback, it is greatly appreciated.