Nice work. I want to say two things: 1. Maybe emphasize the Destiny universe a little more. For me, it felt like a normal Sherlock story with some occasional Destiny sprinkled in. Maybe that’s what you were going for. I personally would want a little more Destiny in there, but that’s just me though. 2. Maybe extend the duration of a case from 1-2 posts to maybe 3-4. That way, you can emphasize the mystery, create more build up and add more tension. It felt like Sherlock solved everything in two seconds. Have him struggle to find meaning and maybe even loose from time to time. I’d find that to be more interesting. Again, maybe that’s just me.