I haven't read anything else from your story, but this was very good.
Not only does the story itself (that you have started with this post) build intrigue, but it's written a lot better than the stuff that usually gets posted here.
Good job.
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Edited by Cell-3: 7/23/2018 11:08:51 PMWhat did you find intriguing about this? Curiosity overwhelms me. [spoiler]Also I plan to use the mystery of this event in Season 2 of DarkSpire.[/spoiler]
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I'm confused. You said you were scrapping darkspire?
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Honestly idk yet.
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It's not one specific thing. It's just the sort of extract that gets me interested in the world of a story, much like when finding an interesting note in a video game.