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7/4/2018 2:28:23 AM
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I love the writing but there is one thing you could improve on: Repetition.
[spoiler]Bump! Loving it![/spoiler]
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Yeah, it is sometimes late when I am writing stuff so I understand.
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It happens to me too... Alot.... Yeah my lesson has been learned after writing part 3 of DarkSpire: Don’t write when you feel sleepy...
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Hah. The worst part is that I just think about what I will write then write it in one go. I don’t even use google docks. I have to do it all on my phone.
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Whoa that must suck... I write mine in notes...
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Well I know what the next four parts are going to be about already. Exploding stormtroopers and crashing tie fighters. And yes. I phrased that not wrong at all. Totally.
