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6/27/2018 4:44:57 PM
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Feedback?
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besides keep it up? because honestly it is pretty good.
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So you don’t see [b][i]any[/i][/b] need of improvement?
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you can always improve i just don't know how. Take the Fanfiction Ashes of the Past. it is a wonderful peace of fan-fiction. it has 273 chps at this moment with over one million words. Try and read that and see if you can learn something. If anything go over the chapters and read them outloud to see if the flow seems good to you.
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I’ve heard of that story... Also I’ve been considering the read out loud thing. Sort of like an audio book. Like I’ll just stay up at night reading to myself in a fairly loud voice.
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It helps from what I heard, to read it out loud. It makes you think does this sound stupid.
