[quote]Dawn slumped to all fours as she dry heaved, choking on exhaustion, failure, and -bleep!-. "Professor, I can't..!" She breathed, a combination of sweat, -boop!-, and tears running down her face. "I'm not.. I'm not gonna make it..!" BraveCole was deep in Dawn,she didn't know how much more her body could hold up. Dawn cried more as she felt her teacher -blam!- her. BraveCole grabbed Dawn by her short white hair, a fistfull, and brought her face up to his and looked her in the eye. Dawn choked on her inner angst. Brave let go of Dawn's hair and grabbed her by her -oh!- and began dragging her toward the boiling edge.[/quote] You may have made a masterpiece of a story, but R34 can work in many ways. [spoiler]I'm sorry.[/spoiler]