Bumpity. Can't read as of now, but whenever you are, I would suggest to switch the characters around at one point(maybe 25 chapters?). Get some fresh stuff in there, new directions, you get it. I'll read and see what you have later.
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Funny you should mention that. I've already got a full roadmap for Season One of Fireteam Ashen. There will be some changes and growths when Season Two begins.