JavaScript is required to use Bungie.net

Forums

[This group has been deleted]
originally posted in: The end of Exypnos
Edited by Milk: 11/13/2016 1:35:51 AM
6
Varicks? As in fallen Varriks?
English

Posting in language:

 

Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

  • Yeah, she was adopted or something I dunno I became a Co-Writer of the main story after that point

    Posting in language:

     

    Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

  • Maybe hash this detail out with the other writer if you're a co-writer. It could be some Joe Blow from nowhere, but giving an established character a secret adopted daughter nobody knows is a novice mistake in terms of writing. My advice, make your own character for a father, make this your story, because reading that line made me come to a grinding halt and raised a series of questions with me.

    Posting in language:

     

    Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

  • Edited by Jelly: 11/13/2016 11:51:10 AM
    Yep i have no idea why aurum(main writer) put that detail in.... but I worked with what I had

    Posting in language:

     

    Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

  • It was my Brother, Satyr

    Posting in language:

     

    Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

  • However, this IS an AU from the events of Destiny, and many things could have gone down differently. Like how the Guardian from the Main Storyline of Destiny was a Human Male Warlock, and they failed to stop Oryx

    Posting in language:

     

    Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

  • Yeah, I completely agree, but I was not aware of the story at all before I joined, and they had gotten past the point of no return for Exypnos. However, I shall share your rather helpful comment with our leader.

    Posting in language:

     

    Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

You are not allowed to view this content.
;
preload icon
preload icon
preload icon