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6/19/2016 4:00:10 AM
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You could make it a lot more detailed. I love detailed. I loved it though, the dialogue a little to kiddish their guardians defenders of darkness of course if it it's someone like cayde sadistic in all ways lol its okay
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Funny thing, the main characters are based off of my friends that I play with. The titan is all serious and annoyingly obedient, and the warlock is kiddish and annoyingly rebellious.
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Ah I gotcha taking what's around you and using it to wrote. A wonderful classic
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I guess what made this story even better was because I knew the scenery. It was like a moving playing in my head. That's why I loved it. However for someone who's never heard of destiny add a little more consideration to their surroundings and explain them. Then again why someone not affiliated with destiny would read that who knows just in case though right? Lol
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Lol thanks for the input I really appreciate it!
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No problem! Keep it up! I would love to read more! Imagine a destiny book or better yet.. A movie
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If there was a movie, Bungie would just cut so much from it, it would just be a 20 minute short on YouTube
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Lol agreed
