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[b]Important Stuff[/b]
Name: Cai Yuexin
Class: Hunter
-Main Subclass - Gunslinger
Gender: Female
Race: Awoken / Taiwanese
*Looks:
*Height- 5'7"
*Hair-
*style- Assymetrical Bob
*lengths- neck length
*color- Light Purple
*Eyes-
*color- Yellow
**change color on mood- no
**Nationality: Old Taiwan
Ghost:
Shell- Iron Banner
*Name- Xiao Zhu
Weapons:
Primary- Inward Lamp
Special- Long Far Gone (Void)
Heavy- Truth
Armor
Helmet- Iron Camelot
Gauntlets- Spine of Young Amakara
Chest- Iron Companion
Boots- Vermilion Stripe
Class Item- the fist from Ghallahorn
Likes: Smoking, Music, Sketching
Dislikes: Humans
Special Abilities:
How do we meet him/her: Yuexin can be found among the wastes of Mars and Phobos. If you ever encounter Cabal strike teams and they suddenly get picked off one at a time, then just know Yuexin was there.
[b]Tell me More:[/b] You ever wonder how Cayde always knew what was happening, before it was happening? It's because hunters like Yuexin were out there, on the frontier, watching the enemy. Her ghost found her on Venus far away from the Ishtar Academy. She didn't remember who she had been before, nor did she remember the name on the ancient dog tags that had clang to the scraps of clothing that were on her chest, but she took that name and kept it ever since. She travelled with other guardians for a time, until secret incursions into Jupiter's moons claimed the others, and changed her. She lost faith in humanity after clashes with humans outside of the Last City claimed her lover, in which she exiled herself to the frontier to deal with the Darkness she could actually interact with.
Personality: Serious yet warm to those she trusts, Yuexin isn't confrontational, nor is she overly confident. She instead prefers words in quiet, calm conversation.
Quotes: On her distrust in humanity: "If only the Vanguard recognized the threat from within our own City". On the Traveller: "I will die, and so will all the other guardians I know. I just hope that when it's my time to go, the traveller will remember what I gave for it, what we gave for it." On the Cabal: "There's something wrong with them. Not just the usual darkness, but a kind of weariness, a kind of fatigue. Why send so many troops here and stop at Mars? And where is the 3rd Fleet? The First set up at Phobos, the 2nd Mars, but the 3rd?" On her past: "He was exceptional in many ways, friend. I remember his passing everytime I come back to the Tower. "
Fun Facts: Yuexin speaks Mandarin Chinese.
*Pets: none.
Notable items owned: A coin given to her by Cayde, and the dog tags of a fallen friend.
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Damn. Way better than my character.
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No way, he sounds cool too!
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Thnx! Still think yours has more character though.
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I work on my characters a lot -- they just never find homes to be in. I have many characters I form concepts of, but only a few that I develop as much as her.
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Yeah, I would have added more it's just that some of the other ideas I had for Grays abilities were just to OP lol.
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Haha I always try to keep my characters in check, and instead give them more depth and personality.
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Yeah your character is more down to earth and more realistic. I guess I was trying to go for a character who has a lot of power but still cares for those around him. So just a question, could you critic my character and give me some feedback so i can develop him further, and possibly work on his story arc? Sorry if I'm asking too much.
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Yeah sure -- I'll do that
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Thank you.