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3/11/2016 6:42:25 PM
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A void arc Blade? Nothing really impressive with the writing, some effort to build an atmosphere, but just a guardian killing with no real danger.
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Did you enjoy mine? :) some people say it's a pile of $#!+, I agree 😏
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No, I am using an arc sword. This is not a main story by any means, it is simply supposed to be like the prelude of a symphony, you would understand if you read my other fan fictions.
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I probably would if I read your other ones, but this one didn't grab me all that well.
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It isn't supposed to. It is just an explanation *how I fight non- guardians *my morals *my hatred of vex
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The explanation is rather glossed over in all matters. How you fight non-guardians seems to just be swing your sword. Your morals are that you don't kill fallen, but with no depth it doesn't come across. And finally hatred for vex, without depth it doesn't create much
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Of course, this would make sense if you read the rest of my backstory. But you seem insistent on basing my writing ability on one, minor piece.
