RIP Sebastion Roh, the "hero"
Also, in the spoiler there's a typo where you put "her" instead of she.
"Her didn't respond"
Otherwise, it's great, very interesting
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Awesome! Thanks for the tip!!!
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Another error: somewhere in the spoiler, Janus says "he [i]save[/i] the planet."
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Yup found it. Thanks!!!
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No problem. You're a great storyteller, I can't count how many times I've laughed out loud reading your stuff!
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Haha thanks! Reading some of the comments sometimes makes me laugh just as much lol