This isnt an original story, its basically destinys grimoire typed into a long paragraph
English
-
Edited by The Stalker: 11/27/2015 4:58:51 AMIt's not meant to be totally original. It's meant to take destiny and turn it into an actual story. And it's not finished, obviously.
-
But its just a summary of the existing grimoire. I know you can do better man, no hate, just constructive criticism
-
Alright, appreciated. No worries.
-
I mean like, we know about the ahamkaras right, you could expand on the existing grimoire snipits and create your own tale of a fireteam making a last stand, holed up in a base somewhere taking them on etc. Like a spin off story. Because we already know the basic gist of the destiny grimoire story. I like the way your weaving it together into a more coherent story though, so props
-
Thanks; that was my goal. I suppose a spin off would be better; I'll think about it.