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`${userDetail.user.displayName}${userDetail.user.cachedBungieGlobalDisplayNameCode ? `#${standardizeBungieGlobalCode(userDetail.user.cachedBungieGlobalDisplayNameCode)}` : ""}`}}
{{getUserClans()}}
11/27/2015 3:09:16 AM
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Third sentence... Remove "But" from "But before the collapse" having that In but in there doesn't make sense. Also nice work I'm not hating just helping. Thanks
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No worries. Help and proofreading is always appreciated.
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Just kinda stuck out imo. Hope you go some where go with this
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Should I begin the actual story or leave it at the "grimoire"?
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Begin
